The following criteria describe the primary standards according to which essays for the first-year writing program are evaluated. These criteria also provide students with a means of understanding their own writing strengths and weaknesses. Thus, for example, a student who understands that a particular essay is marked by clarity of prose and significant strengths in analysis, but that it fails to maintain and develop one main point will have an easier time figuring out how to better approach the next assignment.
Individual instructors may present these standards to you in slightly different language, and their comments on your work may not address every item on this list.
The central claim (also called thesis or main point) guides both writer and readers. This central claim should be reflected—sometimes directly, sometimes indirectly—in each paragraph of a successful essay. A good central claim is not obvious; it is debatable, worthy of discussion.
A successful essay is rich with examples, evidence, and discussion. The writer develops—substantiates, explains, and illustrates—all of his or her points.
A successful essay is one that is organized clearly and logically. A well-organized essay provides readers with an engaging opening, well-constructed paragraphs, appropriate transitional cues between paragraphs and sections, and a satisfying ending.
A successful essay demonstrates analysis, when the writer is thinking on the page. It consists of the moments when the writer connects evidence to a central claim through logic and careful reflection. Analysis is evident when a writer connects one piece of evidence with a larger phenomenon or theorizes about a specific quality. Analysis is asking and addressing questions. Analysis is discussion.
Clarity of Prose
A successful essay is characterized by clarity of prose, which comes not only from demonstrated mastery of English grammar, usage, and mechanics but also from careful proofreading. Clarity is further enhanced through elegant, well-constructed sentences.